"Shes so nosy... I have... rid
of her... my wife... Itll be... surprise," someone said over the phone, though
Rebecca Fairfield could not hear very well because of a bad connection. It seemed she had
accidentally been let in on another conversation.
"A surprise... funny... pay... police... do after... what
if... what weapon... trouble... right Derek?"
Rebecca Fairfield had been trying to
get hold of her husband Fred at his office. Though the line was fuzzy, Rebecca was sure it
was Fred and his friend Derek Alden. As she heard the click of the phone being hung up,
several haunting words repeated themselves over and over in her head. Nosy, rid, wife,
surprise, police, trouble. Wife! Weapon! Wife! Rid! Weapon! One horrid, hideous little
idea crept its way slowly into her mind. Murder! A stab of fear gripped its icy, chilling
fingers around her like a strangling rope. One last bit of sense tried to tell her she was
jumping to conclusions but fear won the tug of war game inside her head. Murder! There it
was again - that icy idea. Her husband was planning to murder her! He had acted
awfully strange lately, as if he had a secret. And he had. She thought he had been working
too late, but now she knew the real reason. Murder! She sank to the floor and just stared
ahead of her at the leg on the coffee table, dumbfounded and stunned. And there she sat,
as the hands on the grandfather clock worked and toiled to steal another minute, another
hour from her hands.
Rebecca Fairfield had been married to
Fred Fairfield for almost a year. They had met in Africa, where Fred had been hunting in
the jungle and Rebecca had been sightseeing. She had liked to travel then but now she was
content to stay at home. Freds hunting prizes and trophies, along with bearskin rugs
and the heads of the animals he had killed were collected in his "Hunting Room,"
in their quiet country home. Rebecca never went into that room, but Fred did all the
household business by his desk at the window. Rebecca hated the room; the animals seemed
to plead, staring at her with blank eyes misted over with a horrid look of death. It was
as if they wanted to tell her some dreaded secret, like - You are next! But the other
rooms were charming and she was quite happy in her new home, that is, until now. That
horrid idea was so bothersome, it kept stabbing her with fear. Murder! She started, as she
realized she had to get out of here before...
Bong! The clock struck one. Rebecca
darted upstairs, dashed down the hall into the bedroom and raced to the closet. She
grabbed a suitcase, stuffed as many clothes into it as possible, and -
"Rebecca! Im home!"
No! He cant be home, she thought
frantically. Its too early! She stood her eyes widened, her heart beating a million
times faster than normal, and she was paralyzed, glued to the floor with fear.
Step. Step. Step. He was coming
upstairs! She shoved the suitcase under the bed and ran to the window. It wouldnt
open!
"Dear Lord, help me, " she
groaned. It wouldnt open. Murder! That tiny, harmless word wedged its way again into
her mind. Murder!
"Good afternoon, dear, " Fred
greeted her.
"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" She
howled.
"Whats the matter?!
Whats wrong?! What happened?! What is it?" Fred asked worried and concerned.
"No... no...nothing.
I...I...ah...you...just...fr...frightened me, thats all. What... what are you doing
home so...so early?"
"I took the rest of the day
off!" He smiled warmly. How could he be so annoyingly cheerful when he was about to
murder her? She didnt want to answer that. He took the day off just to see her - or
rather - just to see her as a corpse! Her heart sank. She was doomed.
"I... ah... Im gonna go for
a walk, okay? See ya later!" She skipped nervously out of the room, but Fred grabbed
her arm.
"No, wait. Lets go
downstairs. I have a little surprise for you."
She tried to protest but he pulled her
downstairs straight in front of a door she was not quite happy to see - the door to the
"Hunting Room."
As he opened the door, she looked
straight ahead of her on top of the mantle. There hung neatly on the wall was Freds
hunting gun! Murder! It was big and fierce and Rebecca felt as though she had gained a
hundred pounds just looking at it. She was always dead scared of that thing, but it meant
a lot to Fred.
And now I know why, she thought
sarcastically. She dropped heavily to the floor, her head spinning. Murder! Murder!
Murder! And suddenly, everything went dark.
She awoke, groggy and scared. Murder!
That awful word would not give up!
This must be the end, she thought. He
had killed her and she was dead. And then, she saw his face, a false look of concern
painted across it. It wasnt over - yet.
"Dear, what happened? Are you all
right? Here, let me help you. Can you walk? What happened?"
She couldnt let him know that she
had learned of his plan. There might still be one last little tiny bit of a chance left to
escape. She had to think - and fast. She wouldnt let him suspect a thing or she
would be a goner faster than you could say the word -
No, she didnt even want to think
that word again.
"Im all right. Really.
Im fine. Its just this room. I...I cant stand it. It gives me the
creeps. All the dead animals. Im fine though, " she said, her voice shaky and
unsure. Why do you care if Im all right or not anyway, she asked silently.
"Oh, Im sorry dear. I forgot
you hate this room, but I only wanted to get something for you. For the surprise."
And what a surprise, she thought grimly.
Fred walked over to the mantle. The
mantle! The gun! Murder!
Rebecca gulped. Slowly he reached up
over the mantle for the horrid "thing," as Rebecca referred to it. For a moment,
she couldnt breathe. Her heart stopped. A wave of paralysis swept over her again.
And then she saw something interesting. A little object, lying on the desk waiting to do
some work. Just a plain, ordinary, everyday little letter opener. But not in
Rebeccas hands. No, in Rebeccas hands it became something extraordinary and
rare. In her hands it was a weapon. Murder! That word really wasnt too bad after
all. It was just a word. No, now it seemed friendly and comforting. It was a
good
word. It soothed her. A transformation took place inside if her. A sheet of steel closed
over her heart, making it harder than stone. Her eyes, usually so beautiful and radiating
happiness and sunshine, shaded over and darkened, now shining hatred. She became
malevolent and malign at the touch of the cool metal letter opener hitting her shaky hand.
That ordinary object was like a magic wand of a fairy, able to change her so suddenly. But
it wasnt a magic wand and she wasnt in a fairy tale. This was real.
Murder! She inched along, as a cat - a
dangerous cat. A cat about to pounce on an unsuspecting victim. And pounce she did, just
as Fred was turning around. His last sight was of his wife, with her deadly hands just
about to plunge down...
It was over. It was the end. But she
was still here! She was alive! She was slightly surprised at the ironic ending. She was to
be murdered, but instead, she had murdered the murderer! He thought he was so smart, but
he forgot about her! Of course she would find out about his ridiculous plan! She
wasnt an idiot!
But then she began to calm down and the
steel over her heart began to break. Her heart melted, no longer hard as stone. Her eyes
brightened and happiness and brightness shone through once more. She was Rebecca again.
Then the realization of what she had done came over her. The evil watcher on her shoulder,
upset with this change in her whispered, "You are not a corpse!" But someone
else was. She shuddered and wanted to cry. Rebecca looked down at the still figure
sprawled on the floor and she suddenly felt stunned and shocked. She wanted to scream but
nothing escaped her. Then she looked at her hands. No! There was the weapon! In her hands!
She dropped it quickly. Murder! She fell on the couch and cried, the tears streaming from
her eyes. The eyes that had lost sunshine again and was replace by fear, a deeper fear
than she had ever known before. Who was that masked rider who bound her with the lasso of
fear again and again?
She had committed a murder! She needed
to confide in someone, but no one was there. Then a calm came over her and suddenly it was
very quiet - quiet as a grave. The phone rang. She limped over to it and picked it up.
"H...H...Hello?" she
whimpered.
"Hi Rebecca! Did Fred give you the
surprise?" The voice on the phone was so cheerful and upbeat. It was also annoying.
"Who... Who...Whos
calling?"
"Its Derek! Derek Alden! You
sound as if you dont know me!"
"Oh, hello
Derek," she said unemotionally.
"Well! Did Fred give you his
surprise?"
"How could he if Im still
talking?"
"Huh?"
"I have a confession to make. I
heard the conversation between you two today, and though it was fuzzy, I knew of his plan
to murder me!"
"Mur...mur...murder you? How
ridiculous can you get Rebecca? Hes - I know I shouldnt be telling you this
but - hes bringing you home a ruby! A real ruby! Isnt that wonderful?"
"Youre bluffing!" she
said, unconvincingly. "Why did he say he had to get rid of me then? And what did he
mean by "weapon" and "police?"
"Rebecca! Ive never heard
you talk like this before! He was talking about his nosy secretary, Miss Harper, and how
he would have to, ah, "get rid of her" if he wanted to keep the ruby a secret.
You see, he didnt want every thief in town to know of his fortune. He said if it was
stolen he would call the police and tell them he would pick out a weapon and kill the guy.
You know Fred and his stupid jokes. But anyway, did he give it to you?"
"No, no he was not able to."
"What do you mean he wasnt
able to? Whats with the past tense? Rebecca! Whats happened?"
But he never got an answer.
"Rebecca? Rebecca?"
Rebecca had a sudden, queer, unknown
feeling come over her and the phone dropped from her limp hand. She felt faint. What ruby?
A little voice in her head kept saying four dreadful word over and over again, never
giving her peace, always taunting. You are a murderer. You are a murderer. And it was
true. She was a murderer.
Where was the ruby anyway? She looked
down at the dead figure. There in his hand was a small gray box. She took it from his cold
hand. A perfect ruby shaped like an eye - an evil eye - lay in the box. An eye the color
of the deep red blood that trickled everywhere. It was true! He was going to give her a
ruby! He wasnt getting the gun! He wasnt even thinking about murder! But she
was. You are a murderer! She had killed her own husband! You are a murderer! The voice was
at it again! What did she have to live for? Then she looked up at the mantle. Funny, how
she happened to focus on that thing, just as that little voice whispered a new idea...
Next door, at 16 Maple Drive, Doris
Struther was dusting in her quaint little home when she heard an odd noise - a noise she
had seldom heard before.
"Henry! Henry!" she hollered
at her husband (he was a little deaf). "Did ya hear that? A loud noise! Almost like a
- well - almost like a shot..."
The End.
A Little
About Myself
I am fifteen years old and a freshman in High School. I love to write, especially short
stories and poetry. I have several poems published; one in Creative Communications
newest edition A Celebration of New Jerseys Young Poets in the category of
one of the top ten poems in the seventh, eighth, and ninth grade division. I enjoy reading
fictional novels, mostly classics and mysteries. A favorite pastime is acting. I have been
in the choruses of Peter Pan, The Wizard of Oz, and Annie in grammar school,
and last year I was the stepmother in Cinderella. I also like to paint, using
acrylics and watercolors, in my free time.
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